OMG im sorry i havent been on deviantart for ages... im so sorry T_T!! ur more than welcome to use my art for your fanfic if you give me credits!! <3 (although I think im rlly late..) anyways im so sorry for the late reply TwT
Not at all! I think it's fantastic! Just the hands are astonishing! I think every drawing should have a certain focus point. So, you have first the contrast of Jack crouching and Pitch standing. Then you have the colour clash against the white. Jack's focus point I find is the hair flicking off his face as he's gazing over the frozen wasteland, and Pitch's focus point as I said is the hands, very cunning
Wow, this really does highlight Jack being alone or fearing to be alone, I love it, and the way you drew the snow flying around. Man, I love seeing these two together, I dont' care if it's a pairing thing or they're fighting or confronting each other about fear, they just have great interaction potential in any way in my opinion. Thanks for drawing this!